Yours to Hold ~ 2Chapter Two ~ Something I Can Never HaveYours to Hold ~ 2 by Storyteller21
“Elena, you’re not eating,” Nora prodded the plate towards her as if the closer proximity would entice her to eat.
Elena glanced up at the peanut butter sandwich that had been nudged in her direction. “Sorry, I was looking at the want ads,” she replied, but made no move to pick up her sorry excuse for breakfast.
“You’ve been home for three days and you haven’t left the house,” Nora observed worriedly. “Have you called your friends or... What was that boy’s name? Dylan?”
“No, I haven’t called anyone,” Elena replied and circled a ‘help wanted’ ad for the second morning in a row. She felt oddly glad that it hadn’t been taken yet. She wasn’t very sure if she wanted a job this summer, but she could use a
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